tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3460077998869234907.post6873222104310748202..comments2023-08-16T09:31:56.334-04:00Comments on Poetic Leanings: Poem: Present And Accounted ForSTPhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18010661731570038007noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3460077998869234907.post-54667834313577598912009-01-11T17:37:00.000-05:002009-01-11T17:37:00.000-05:00Thanx. You gave me a fun challenge because these ...Thanx. You gave me a fun challenge because these were hard - particularly the last one. Reality TV is so destructive and absurd that it seemed to be the perfect place to go with the idea.STPhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18010661731570038007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3460077998869234907.post-90149079614195645472009-01-11T15:58:00.000-05:002009-01-11T15:58:00.000-05:00Wow, you've come through with the triple dog dare!...Wow, you've come through with the triple dog dare!<BR/>I like how you combined the intentions of wind,storms and water...all three together being a "mystery of god".<BR/>Glances, at someone or something does evoke shyness. Your middle poem speaks to shy flirtations that can't lead to anything more. <BR/>I can relate to "Watching" except for me, the doing done (teaching) does do it for me. It is probably the mindless, meaningless, mundane escape of TV that will do us all in more than the real day!<BR/>I enjoyed your process. Thanks for inviting me be a part of it.presenthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16853240090222371220noreply@blogger.com