Sunday, March 9, 2008

Poem: Guarantee

Guarantee

With simplicity
Coming from a loving friend
There is assurance


Copyright SGW 2008


For this week's prompt at One Single Impression: Kindness.
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15 comments:

  1. qualcosa di belloMarch 9, 2008 at 7:31 PM

    yes, it is the simple kindness in everyday actions that holds us

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  2. SandyCarlsonMarch 9, 2008 at 9:33 PM

    Oh, yes indeed, Scott! Simplicity in a relationship is the first step onto the front porch of life. This is wonderful.

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  3. Tumblewords:March 9, 2008 at 10:06 PM

    Love the 'guarantee' - it speaks kindness! Very nice!

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  4. Gemma Wiseman aka Pamela AdamsMarch 9, 2008 at 11:10 PM

    Great the way you link 2 abstracts with a sensory, tangible image!

    Just lovely!

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  5. EverydaythingsMarch 10, 2008 at 7:41 AM

    very reassuring words. Nice.

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  6. Scott GMarch 10, 2008 at 11:42 AM

    Reminds me of some of the Zen poetry I have been reading

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  7. RavenMarch 10, 2008 at 7:44 PM

    The word that comes to my mind is "gentle." Tender and gentle... like a loving friend, I guess. Very nice.

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  8. little wing writerMarch 11, 2008 at 2:54 PM

    for so few words speaks volumes...

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  9. AnonymousMarch 11, 2008 at 11:47 PM

    I kind of needed that! Thanks!

    Can it get any worse than this?

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  10. storytellerMarch 12, 2008 at 12:47 PM

    blessed assurance
    guaranteeing kindness with
    friendship …what a gift

    Hugs and blessings,

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  11. MarilynMarch 12, 2008 at 6:10 PM

    I like the first one. It reminds me of the way my husband makes freinds of strangers in minutes. I want to be able to do that.

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  12. MarilynMarch 12, 2008 at 6:14 PM

    Sheesh... I'll go sit in the corner. This is what I get for commenting in the middle of doing six other things. That comment got put into your comment box, but I had just read some other poems.

    I guess there is still simplicity in that momentary freinedship... but more so in the older freindships where you can understand without words.

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  13. spacedlawMarch 15, 2008 at 8:14 AM

    Deceptively simple.
    Wonderful.

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  15. AnonymousNovember 29, 2009 at 4:51 AM

    Hello. And Bye.

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