Sunday, May 25, 2008

Poem: Whirl

Whirl

Upon reflection
Thoughts run circles around me
And I am dizzy

Copyright SGW 2008

For the prompt at One Single Impression: Reflecting
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13 comments:

  1. paisleyMay 25, 2008 at 9:20 AM

    excellent.. i am often sucked into thoughts vortex myself...

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  2. AnonymousMay 25, 2008 at 9:54 AM

    ur poem's good and i like it!..thank u..

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  3. BarbMay 25, 2008 at 11:07 AM

    Oh, this is too true! I often find myself thinking in circles!

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  4. JukotaMay 25, 2008 at 11:36 AM

    I like how you captured the ripple effect without saying ripple.

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  5. SandyCarlsonMay 25, 2008 at 3:00 PM

    You are speaking for many of us today, Scott. Thanks. This is well done.
    Writing in Faith: Poems

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  6. RavenMay 25, 2008 at 3:35 PM

    Oh, my but I know the feeling! Well done.

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  7. AnonymousMay 25, 2008 at 9:13 PM

    Reminds me of tornadoes tearing across the landscape of thought. Really nice.

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  8. qualcosa di belloMay 25, 2008 at 9:33 PM

    this made me laugh...only because i know that feeling a bit too well. oh, & i love your blog's subtitle!

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  9. gautami tripathyMay 26, 2008 at 9:46 AM

    Well, all of us can relate to this dizzyness!

    reflected changes

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  10. AnonymousMay 26, 2008 at 11:37 AM

    Oh yeah! Another dizzy writer here! So great!

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  11. Patois42May 27, 2008 at 12:58 PM

    Wonderful. I can relate to this perfectly!

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  12. AnonymousMay 27, 2008 at 8:32 PM

    ...yes, i agree... thinking too many thoughts can be exhausting...

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  13. Annie JeffriesMay 28, 2008 at 5:40 PM

    Hah! True words, indeed.

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