Monday, May 17, 2010

Poem: The Hope And The Glory

The Hope And The Glory


Long since abandoned the masquerade dance

What men holding power ever meant to advance

Written-word pages of doctrinaire thought


Ritualized worship as divinity bought

Yet Israel and Jewish as a compound of time

God’s weary people with a truth they’d define

An essence identity by a light of the soul

Through suffering hatred of an unending toll

The Macabee princes who have stood ‘gainst the wall

No longer the timid of indignity’s call


Imperfections abounding by unsettling choice

Extremisms flourish in a far too right voice

And religion’s illusion grown apart from God’s word

Devoutness as pretence to round up the herd


Yet still admiration for the self-made great land

Israel as Zion since arisen from sand

These children of Israel are heroically bold

With a secular bonding the connection takes hold


Copyright SGW 2010


Commentary: I have rarely felt the need to have extensive remarks attached to a poem. However, this piece feels different. First, I should mention that this poem is based on the two Herman Wouk books, “The Hope” and “The Glory.” They have inspired me deeply with a desire to visit Israel.


They have also made me feel a need to distinguish between following Judaism as a religion and being Jewish as a people apart from organized religion. And that is what a large part of this poem’s message is. Early on, it speaks to the falseness of organized religion; the man-made creation used to formalize thought and action, which I feel is a device of those in power to control those who are not.


The poem then goes on to speak to the amazing accomplishments of the people of Israel – forming a nation surrounded by those that would destroy them after barely surviving the cauldron of NAZI-ism, creating a vibrant and lively society and economy from a desert wasteland and building a military that could protect all that they have given rise to.


The poem mentions Israel’s failings, too. The “unsettling choice” is the short-sighted and wrongheaded decision to build settlements in the West Bank and east Jerusalem that will be hard to dismantle and undo. Much of the difficulty lies in my original theme of religion’s extremism. These settlements, more than anything else that Israel controls, are an obstacle to Middle East peace. They have also damaged the moral rightness of Israel’s cause and position.


Without the settlements, there would be no legitimate claim that Israel in any way is the obstructing factor to peace. Taken out of the equation, the reasons for a lack of peace in the Middle East are all on the shoulders of the Arab nations. Their unwillingness to recognize Israel’s right to exist and of giving ground on military assurances to provide for that right, their stubborn resistance to removing the Hamas/Hezbollah presence, their promotion of an unreasonable right of return (that will need to be exchanged for financial compensation that Arab nations should be major contributors to), and the despotic rulers of their own countries with no exceptions are far more the cause of the circumstances in the Middle East than any Israeli positions.


In summation, this poem expresses love of Israel, despite its flaws, and a bond with the Israeli people that I feel as someone born a Jew. It hints at my previously versed views on organized religion, but with a belief that religion’s failings can be separated from a nationalist’s pro-Israeli sentiments.

Sunday, April 25, 2010

Poem: Teabaggers

Teabaggers


Unwilling to learn;

Intellectually lazy and incurious.

Rants against Wall Street;

But oppose regulation.

Cries o’er a debt burden.

Where were the voices during Ronnie and George?

“Take our country back!”

Does the white hood still fit?

Signs opposing socialist healthcare,

For a plan with Dole, Romney and Nixon roots.

This is the time of the teabagger,

And not much thought or reason.


Copyright SGW 2010

Monday, April 19, 2010

Poem: Oasis

Oasis

Lips are a wasteland
Longing for tender droplets
Of one gentle kiss

Copyright SGW 2008

Thursday, March 25, 2010

Poem: Terrorism

Terrorism

Define terrorism at core:
Infestation of fear.

Cannot try al Qaeda in civilian courts
Fear
Don’t close Guantanamo Bay
Fear
Incite ignorant masses over “Big Government”
Fear
Sloganeer – Marxism, Socialism, NAZI-ism
Fear
Destroying marital institutions
Fear
Healthcare reform, Death panels, radical liberals
Fear

What is fear?
Lack of ideas
Small minds
No answers
Cowardice

And not all terrorists turn to Mecca
But share an increasing affinity for tea

Copyright SGW 2010

Monday, February 15, 2010

Poem: Nightwalker (Wolf)

Nightwalker (Wolf)


Tucked in the silence ‘neath the moon’s sullen stare

Skirting denials of the men unaware

Quickly embark to a deepest, hid place

Known by the traveler present time won’t embrace

Passing gardens of Eden and trees to the sky

The world fills with beauty through an innocent eye

Dart like a current by the thickets and brush

Listening to winds in the soft evening’s hush

Mingle with angels in the race against death

Here lies the path where the shadow finds breath


Copyright SGW 2010

Sunday, February 7, 2010

Poem: Shadows

Shadows

Shadows are hiding places
Holding what wishes to remove
But also that which is boxed
Boxed into a corner
With no desire to be
Yet is
Is from neglect
Is from obsolescence
Is from fear
Is
And it is lonely in the shadows

Copyright SGW 2010

Monday, January 25, 2010

Poem: Demise

Demise

Flowers of a thousand blooms have fled
As Founder’s dream has split and bled
Where once laid rest a chalice glow
A garden dies; no one would sow

The people spoke of something bold
Yet shortly hence their fear took hold
As demagogues and selfish actors
Face frightened fools and whim reactors

People, people, your mindless voices
You do not learn of promised choices
Impatience points to no return
A country’s death you’ll soon discern

So hide within your slogan season
It lacks a depth; devoid all reason
The noise grows loud to drown the mind
You look to see you fell behind

Copyright SGW 2010

Sunday, January 3, 2010

Poem: Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind

Eternal Sunshine Of The Spotless Mind


Eternal the sunshine where spotless the mind

Nothing can injure what nothing can find

Erasing the sorrow; unfulfilling lament

Too much has been given, too much has been spent

Perchance for removal every schism and strain

The depth of the scarring that at once caused such pain

Forgetting the heartbreak, disappointment and loss

Remembrance is sadness we have all come across

So fresh from the suffering what memory designed

Eternal the sunshine where spotless the mind


Copyright SGW 2010


Footnote: Based on a re-watching of one of my favorite movies, "Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind." The movie finds hope that the heart can overcome what we think we'd wish to forget. This poet is not so sure.

Monday, December 28, 2009

Poem: Diversionary Tactic

Diversionary Tactic

Used my pen as an excuse.
A poet, a poet, this man is a poet!
Off I went.
To wri .. eat the molten, chocolate cake.

Copyright SGW 2008

Wednesday, December 16, 2009

Poem: Below Surface

Below Surface

Fool myself
Calm within distraction
“Moments” await in the quiet

Given to reflection
Hopes offer a promise
But disappointments will linger

With words of believing
Mark possibilities
Yet truth reveals the remoteness

A reckoning awaits
Frozen by the weakness
Death is in an absence of faith

Copyright SGW 2007

Thursday, November 26, 2009

Poem: Making Love

Making Love


Sitting together talking

Sharing unbroken vision

A peaceful meditation

Held hands in quiet moments

Hugs in joining, melt to one

Lying beside you naked

Building arousals, entwined

Back and forth of pleasuring

Deep breaths, rolling of bodies

Heartbeat to heartbeat; alive

Laughing with playful vigor

Your slender form upon me

Climactic embrace of joys

Lingering in connection

Then more and more and more still

Marveling over such depth

In the warmth of making love


Copyright SGW 2006