I was driving in the rain the other day and the idea that God was crying over our lost ways struck me. This is meant to be a poem of harmonies by weaving together two separate parts of the same poem. The blue is one piece and the red the other. This poem cannot be read by one person, as the blue and red should be read simultaneously.
Cry Rain
Rain bears reminding of God’s bitter tears
Lost are his blessings in cold, hardened fears
He cries for lack of empathy
He cries in souls divided
He cries when people’s endless hate
Forever gets ignited
Every felt raindrop brings stain to creation
Removed from the people He once felt relation
Can’t find morality in religion’s betrayal
Turns with disgust from extremist’s portrayal
He weeps when faced with persecution
He weeps for rights refrained
He weeps in words that seek to hurt
In bigotry sustained
Rain clouds gain pattern from God’s lonely perch
Intolerant speech marks an unholy church
He cries in lost inclusive virtue
He cries the narrow mind
He cries in doctrine twisted ‘round
That only serves to blind
Rain hopes for cleansing what preaching’s disgraced
Compassionate values might be more embraced
Copyright SGW 2004
Tuesday, December 7, 2004
Poem: Cry Rain
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1 comment:
This is a powerful message....nicely written...good thought on its two-person structure.
CeeCee
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