Sunday, March 9, 2008

Poem: Guarantee

Guarantee

With simplicity
Coming from a loving friend
There is assurance


Copyright SGW 2008


For this week's prompt at One Single Impression: Kindness.

15 comments:

qualcosa di bello said...

yes, it is the simple kindness in everyday actions that holds us

SandyCarlson said...

Oh, yes indeed, Scott! Simplicity in a relationship is the first step onto the front porch of life. This is wonderful.

tumblewords said...

Love the 'guarantee' - it speaks kindness! Very nice!

Greyscale Territory said...

Great the way you link 2 abstracts with a sensory, tangible image!

Just lovely!

Krissie said...

very reassuring words. Nice.

Scott G said...

Reminds me of some of the Zen poetry I have been reading

Raven said...

The word that comes to my mind is "gentle." Tender and gentle... like a loving friend, I guess. Very nice.

LittleWing said...

for so few words speaks volumes...

gautami tripathy said...

I kind of needed that! Thanks!

Can it get any worse than this?

storyteller said...

blessed assurance
guaranteeing kindness with
friendship …what a gift

Hugs and blessings,

Marilyn said...

I like the first one. It reminds me of the way my husband makes freinds of strangers in minutes. I want to be able to do that.

Marilyn said...

Sheesh... I'll go sit in the corner. This is what I get for commenting in the middle of doing six other things. That comment got put into your comment box, but I had just read some other poems.

I guess there is still simplicity in that momentary freinedship... but more so in the older freindships where you can understand without words.

spacedlaw said...

Deceptively simple.
Wonderful.

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