Choosing the road less traveled; now where the hell am I?!
Thanks for lighting the way this week, Scott. The "sharing" is the key to the sunshine. Writing in Faith: Poems
Nothing quite as laughter to illuminate the day.
I can visualise togetherness!laughter lines
A million sunshines.... lovely...
You poem is so wonderful. Reading it on One Single Impression is what made me decide to join this week for the first time.
Beautifully written, very succinct but still with a lot of depth. I loved the memories this brought to mind. Is there anything sweeter than a baby's laughter, I think not! www.mypoeticpath.wordpress.com
Light and laughter! Wonderful
It is such fun to be with someone when they are laughing. Great prompt.
Oh wow, I really liked it, but I didn't know you wrote it. I don't pay attention to that sort of thing, I suppose.
Just love it, Scott! :D
Here's hoping we can always share it. Lovely.
So beautifully said.
Lughter shared is laughter multiplied.
This is exactly M's effect on me. It is so wonderful a poem. I want to send it to him (with your credit, of course. Thank you for expressing what I could not express.
Thanx to all. Andree to be a conduit of your feelings would be as high a complement as a this poet could receive.
ohhhh, that is so sweet and visual.
a 'million sunshines' is such a perfect description of laughter!
perfect description …'laughter shared' creating lightOf ‘a million suns’Thanks for sharing this amazing haiku!Hugs and blessings,
This is beautiful. Love the image.
Okay, still loving this poem even though I've read it 20 times now.
What a wonderful set of compliments. Thanx to all!
A very evocative poem, STP. I really like the way you use a visual attribute for something heard. I find the last line a bit sad despite the atmosphere you've created. There's something more to this small piece just by that addition.It's tough to come up with new words to say how good it is. "Very nice" is inadequate, "Beautiful" doesn't hit the mark entirely. Memorable is how will describe it.Kat
Perceptive Kit Kat.
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