Sunday, May 25, 2008

Poem: Whirl

Whirl

Upon reflection
Thoughts run circles around me
And I am dizzy

Copyright SGW 2008

For the prompt at One Single Impression: Reflecting

13 comments:

paisley said...

excellent.. i am often sucked into thoughts vortex myself...

zoya gautam said...

ur poem's good and i like it!..thank u..

WillThink4Wine said...

Oh, this is too true! I often find myself thinking in circles!

Casconda said...

I like how you captured the ripple effect without saying ripple.

SandyCarlson said...

You are speaking for many of us today, Scott. Thanks. This is well done.
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Raven said...

Oh, my but I know the feeling! Well done.

Pam said...

Reminds me of tornadoes tearing across the landscape of thought. Really nice.

qualcosa di bello said...

this made me laugh...only because i know that feeling a bit too well. oh, & i love your blog's subtitle!

gautami tripathy said...

Well, all of us can relate to this dizzyness!

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MyBellavia said...

Oh yeah! Another dizzy writer here! So great!

Patois said...

Wonderful. I can relate to this perfectly!

one more believer said...

...yes, i agree... thinking too many thoughts can be exhausting...

Annie said...

Hah! True words, indeed.