Poetic Leanings: Poem: Whirl

Sunday, May 25, 2008

Whirl

Upon reflection
Thoughts run circles around me
And I am dizzy

Copyright SGW 2008

For the prompt at One Single Impression: Reflecting

paisley said...: excellent.. i am often sucked into thoughts vortex myself...; May 25, 2008 at 9:20 AM
Anonymous said...: ur poem's good and i like it!..thank u..; May 25, 2008 at 9:54 AM
Barb said...: Oh, this is too true! I often find myself thinking in circles!; May 25, 2008 at 11:07 AM
Jukota said...: I like how you captured the ripple effect without saying ripple.; May 25, 2008 at 11:36 AM
SandyCarlson said...: You are speaking for many of us today, Scott. Thanks. This is well done.
Writing in Faith: Poems; May 25, 2008 at 3:00 PM
Raven said...: Oh, my but I know the feeling! Well done.; May 25, 2008 at 3:35 PM
Anonymous said...: Reminds me of tornadoes tearing across the landscape of thought. Really nice.; May 25, 2008 at 9:13 PM
qualcosa di bello said...: this made me laugh...only because i know that feeling a bit too well. oh, & i love your blog's subtitle!; May 25, 2008 at 9:33 PM
gautami tripathy said...: Well, all of us can relate to this dizzyness!

reflected changes; May 26, 2008 at 9:46 AM
Anonymous said...: Oh yeah! Another dizzy writer here! So great!; May 26, 2008 at 11:37 AM
Patois42 said...: Wonderful. I can relate to this perfectly!; May 27, 2008 at 12:58 PM
Anonymous said...: ...yes, i agree... thinking too many thoughts can be exhausting...; May 27, 2008 at 8:32 PM
Annie Jeffries said...: Hah! True words, indeed.; May 28, 2008 at 5:40 PM